The table below shows the results of a survey of average number og cars per hour usinh three suburban roads durinh working hours in a ten year pollution monitorinh program.
The given tabular chart demostrates the outcome of a research of expected values of cars in every sixty minutes using three suburban roads during working hours in a decade pollution supervising program.The data os calibrated in hours and years.
At the first galnce,the average of cars was 600 on Great york way in a 1993year.However,next two years has same proportion og cars.Next,the number of cars were fluctuating in further three years:1996to1998.Moreover,in the time period of 1999 into 2000 the cars were using nearly similar above 173 on the way.
Probing further,the Harper lane was start from just 82 cars on the road and the cars has doubled in 1994 to 1998.Furthermore,in last four yeara the vehicle has declined as compare to in five years ago.Finally,it can be seen that york lane amount of cars was similar in first two years.But, in next six years the number of cars had rapidly rise and last two years were fully alike.
Overall,the york lane was highest value of cars in each an hour and the Harper lane was lowest than other two roads.
- Walking is known to be beneficial for health but these days the number of people walking has reduced a lot.what are the reasons for this? What can be done to tackle this problem? 61
- Some people think that criminals should be given long term in prison, so as to reduce to crime rate. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 67
- The table below shows the results of a survey of average number og cars per hour usinh three suburban roads durinh working hours in a ten year pollution monitorinh program. 78
- Some people think that criminals should be given long term in prison, so as to reduce to crime rate. To what extend do you agree or disagree? 56
- Some people are beieve that family members os important than friends.Do you agree or disagree? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
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Suggestion: was the highest
...e fully alike. Overall,the york lane was highest value of cars in each an hour and the H...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, however, moreover
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91111111111 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38267189302 2.65546596893 127% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 22.4926829268 200% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.0566844684 43.030603864 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 221.0 112.824112599 196% => OK
Words per sentence: 45.0 22.9334400587 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.75 5.23603664747 244% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 1.69756097561 1119% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219792853975 0.215688989381 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137817346033 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.067216724917 0.0843802449381 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137817346033 0.15604864568 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.067216724917 0.0819641961636 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 24.2 13.2329268293 183% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 10.3012195122 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.09 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.9970731707 182% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.