Shopping has become a favorite pastime among young people. Why do you think it is like that, and do you think they must be encouraged to do other things rather than shopping?
In recent times, fashion and clothing has influenced people in many ways, which has made youth to spend more time on shopping. Let us discuss more about the cause behind it and what can be done to overcome from these.
Firstly, western influence and movies has been the important factor for youth to spend more time on shopping. Emerging IT companies and culture adopted by youth's working in these firms has changed their perception towards shopping because of high income earned. Secondly, movies in (deleted - the) recent times are concentrating mainly on fashion and shopping which inspires the concept to impress their lover or friends. Which in turn is adopted by youth as a favorite pastime during weekends.
In my thoughts, youth must be motivated to spend more time on developing sports and other cultural activities like singing, dancing and reading. This could help them to learn an art or skill that could indirectly help or support them in future, in terms of fame and money. Whereas shopping will only help in spending money.
I am inclined to believe that shopping will not only waste time but also money spent during shopping. Whereas encouraging them would result in building better economy and future for youth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 235, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...t could indirectly help or support them in future, in terms of fame and money. Whereas sh...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... in future, in terms of fame and money. Whereas shopping will only help in spending mon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1030.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 205.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0243902439 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38655311714 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648780487805 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 306.9 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6025400826 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6363636364 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.084494845528 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357558255446 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0275578086343 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502458942329 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0213438048751 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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