Letter: your local council is considering closing a sports and leisure center that it runs in order to save money.
Write a letter to the local council.
in your letter
- give details of how you and your friends or family use the center
- explain why the sports and leisure centre is important for the local community
- describe the possible effects on local people if the center is closes.
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am John Smith local resident of the town Veraval, I am a law-abiding and tax-paying citizen, who is living in this town since last twenty years. I am writing to you in connection with the shutting down the operations of the popular MG club for sports and leisure activities.
For the last five years, me and my family members and my friends are utilizing the services of this center and admiring it also. The special teaching sessions there from expert tutors helped my niece to learn judo and karate and become self-protective.
This center has helped plenty of sports athlete turning their talent into professional front and representing our state at national level. It would be injustice for local habitats to take away such a colossal facility in the name of a budget shortage.
By aborting the activities of this center local people would be recosted to use other such private centers, which would be very costly to them as everyone can't afford the higher fees of this centers. This can create the monopoly among them and there are chances that they might increase the fees and this will lead a restriction to the common men to acquire and use this services.
I would like request you to please rethink the decision and make alternative arrangements rather than closing the essential center.
Yours Faithfully,
John Smith.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 124, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...services of this center and admiring it also. The special teaching sessions there fr...
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Line 5, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...shortage. By aborting the activities of this center local people would be recost...
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Line 5, column 157, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ould be very costly to them as everyone cant afford the higher fees of this centers....
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Line 5, column 188, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...everyone cant afford the higher fees of this centers. This can create the monopoly a...
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Line 6, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ther than closing the essential center. Yours Faithfully, John Smith.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 229.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92576419214 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61357268693 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646288209607 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.3778745445 44.8134815571 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.8 76.5299724578 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9 16.8248392259 136% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.8 4.34317383033 18% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140029364119 0.216113520407 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0560230569432 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033713359175 0.0603063233224 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0653307228158 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0137388859131 0.0580467560999 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 8.37731958763 158% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 8.71597938144 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 7.59969072165 121% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 41.2886597938 157% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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