Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
The region a person grows up in doesn’t entirely affect the success of that person. However, it does have an influence on how the social skills develop during childhood and adolescence. We all understand the importance of having leadership and teamwork skills for a successful career. The native region plays an integral part for a person to acquire these. It is the biggest factor that contributes towards an accomplished person’s success. Other than this, the region earns popularity when a person belonging to it, earns fame and recognition worldwide. To talk about these factors separately;
Firstly, Native region’s influence on an accomplished person: A person’s native land can affect the person’s; Leadership, teamwork and other social skills. Character, opinions and attitude. Education, passion and profession. The availability of modern educational tools and up-to-date resources for study in the native region determines the quality of education a person receives, and the career a person takes up.
Secondly, Accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to Bill Gates, Mark Zuckerberg and Steve Jobs can be considered as best examples to explain the fact that accomplished people popularize their native region as they become famous. These are people who grew up in places that built their skills in technology and hence they are an inspiration to the future generations of their hometown. Keeping these facts in mind, let’s not forget that success of a person is also dependent on hard-work and persistence. The environment and people around can have an influence, but turning that into an accomplishment would depend upon how determined a person is.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 20.9802955665 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1207.87684729 121% => OK
No of words: 266.0 242.827586207 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5037593985 5.00649968141 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13500476039 2.71678728327 115% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578947368421 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.65517241379 27% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.907633314 50.4703680194 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.571428571 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.9669160288 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.25397266985 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 6.9802955665 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480338052099 0.242375264174 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1644344634 0.0925447433944 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.137173526855 0.071462118173 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.352391132654 0.151781067708 232% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.041895573291 0.0609392437508 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 12.6369458128 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 53.1260098522 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.9458128079 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 11.5310837438 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.32886699507 112% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 55.0591133005 145% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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