The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

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The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994.

The supplied vertical histrograms exhibit that the information about the marriage and divorce rate by nine nations during in 1981 and 1994 whereas, the data calibrated in a thousand.

Overall, it can be incurred that the marriage and divorce rate highest in the USA whilst the Italy and Japan was the least divorce rate in both years.

Primarily, it is vividly apparent that the divorce rate was highest in the USA in 1981 it noticed at more than 5 thousand per people whereas, in 1994 it was accorded at declined in 5 thousand. The divorce rate has been declined in 1981 which accorded at approximately 3 thousand per people as well as in 1994 it registrated at more than 3 thousand in UK. In 1981 it was recorded at touch to peak 2 thousand in finland, Germany, fernce furthermore in 1994 it was noticed at rose up 3 thosand per person. Moreover, it has been negligible in Italy in both years.

Similalry, it can clearly seen that the marriage statistic was highest that in two years it was witnessed at near by 10 thousand per person therefore, in Denmark increased that the 6 thousand per person. Aftermore, in all the another years it has been noticed at the just below the 6 thousand per person in1994 while, in 1981 it has been recorded at just over the 6 thousand per person.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, moreover, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 18.0 5.60731707317 321% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1062.0 965.302439024 110% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.5974025974 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60641294306 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 106.607317073 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.424242424242 0.547539520022 77% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 319.5 283.868780488 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 43.2895411734 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.75 112.824112599 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.875 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.75 5.23603664747 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153461733488 0.215688989381 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837809398983 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562820126611 0.0843802449381 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11928530376 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533408869172 0.0819641961636 65% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 61.2550243902 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 10.3012195122 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.99 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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