You found a job opportunity in a foreign country. Write a letter to your friend who knows about the country. In your letter mention the following:
what is the nature of the job?
why did you apply for that job?
ask for details and his/her advice about the country.
Dear John,
It has been ages since we both have talked two each other. Lately, I am very busy in my work, therefore, I could not be in touch with you. Please give regards to your family for me. I am delighted to tell you that, I have applied to the Royal Bank of Canada for the position of financial analyst.
You would be thrilled to know that, they had the same requirement for the job, which I was looking for a long time. The job contains work for evaluating different advances proposals related to credit and maintaining documentation part from beginning till end disbursement.
I was always fascinated by the landscape and immaculate nature of Canada. My interest got a new boost when you uploaded images to your Facebook account. Apart from that my career prospect would also be bright there. That is the nucleus reason I had applied for that position.
As you know Canada very well because you are there for the last five years. you are the one to whom, I can rely on getting necessary nitty-gritty about Canada. Could you please! write me back about the basic information about Canada also your viewpoints for working there
I would be happy to hear from you regarding the details above.
warm wishes!
James.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
... you are there for the last five years. you are the one to whom, I can rely on gett...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Write
...-gritty about Canada. Could you please! write me back about the basic information abo...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Warm
...om you regarding the details above. warm wishes! James.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, regarding, so, therefore, well, apart from, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1024.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 216.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49938263982 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 127.690721649 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657407407407 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 316.8 290.88556701 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5418025636 44.8134815571 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.1428571429 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.4285714286 16.8248392259 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 4.34317383033 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.27807933355 0.216113520407 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874047756099 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672687013275 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145550872088 0.12726935374 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609780678036 0.0580467560999 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.