Some people believe laws change human behaviour. Do you agree with it?
One of the most controversial issues today relates to how Law was created and intended to guide and sharp behaviour. I firmly agree with the statement above. I feel this way for two main reasons, which I will explore in the following essay.
I feel strongly that crime rates can be the primary serious offender for country development. The reason for this is that behavior can play an important role in society. In addition, death penalty can be a major aspect that relates to modern society these days, so people must pay close attention to it. For example, smuggling Drugs is undoubtedly the most accepted criminal offence in singapore.
I feel just as convinced that civil law has profound country culture on unfavourable environment
I often argue that in fact the importance of breaking law must not be overlooked because legislations definitely may effect our behaviour. Furthermore, modern basic function will continue to influence the future of human behaviour. For instance people of a county would prefer aware of law instead of absence of law.
In conclusion, strong positive correlation between law and human behaviour. It has now been shown that not only can crime rates influence civil law, but human behaviour be also can too. It is expected that lawmakers will continue to increase in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, may, so, for example, for instance, i feel, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 31.9359605911 75% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 5.75862068966 226% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1107.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 218.0 242.827586207 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07798165138 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75030891746 2.71678728327 101% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 139.433497537 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633027522936 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 348.3 379.143842365 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 4.6157635468 152% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.5571687147 50.4703680194 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1538461538 104.977214359 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7692307692 20.9669160288 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.25397266985 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.12807881773 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204570785896 0.242375264174 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729339494559 0.0925447433944 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0677386877224 0.071462118173 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112288233755 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0675081032085 0.0609392437508 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 12.6369458128 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 53.1260098522 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.32886699507 109% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 55.0591133005 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 67.5 Out of 90
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