Many people think that regions affect a successful person. What is your opinion about the native region and accomplished person’s influence on the region he belongs to?
Nowadays people think that success of any famous person belongs to the origin of their birth, but opponent believes otherwise and does not support the idea. In my opinion, the place of origin plays a crucial role in upbringing but not completely. This essay will demonstrate the various fact, example, figures and finally conclusion around the idea.
Firstly, it is evident that people do a myriad of struggle to achieve the success, various factors like education, background, parent's support and hard work contribute to one's success. The world is full of people who have achieved their goals with consistent efforts and persistent behaviour. Many famous people came from underdeveloped countries and communities. For example, Barack Obama's background was not very charming, but with consistent efforts and hard work, he became the president of the USA.
In contrast, a wealthy background and good education certainly help people to achieve the goal and taste the success but with hard work, continuous effort is required to retain the position.
In conclusion, place of origin may have fluence but other factors like education, hard work and consistency play a major role. So, with preceded arguments, it is safe to say that success is not dependent on the regions but other factors play a significant role.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 172, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...nts support and hard work contribute to ones success. The world is full of people wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 8.36945812808 179% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 20.9802955665 48% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 31.9359605911 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.75862068966 87% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 1207.87684729 93% => OK
No of words: 211.0 242.827586207 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29857819905 5.00649968141 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81127787577 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7164874652 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 139.433497537 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582938388626 0.580463131201 100% => OK
syllable_count: 336.6 379.143842365 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 3.0 1.56157635468 192% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2801555791 50.4703680194 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.8 104.977214359 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.25397266985 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145857625666 0.242375264174 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547885815459 0.0925447433944 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0492246980848 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0780939618977 0.151781067708 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260211919056 0.0609392437508 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 12.6369458128 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 11.5310837438 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.32886699507 113% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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