Do you agree with objections to skycrapers?
Skyscraper is known as a high and tall building which has a tall over 100 m. Since modern technology, such as crane is founded, the number of skyscraper towers rising sharply. Most of them are built in the capital city of a country whereas usuallng huge exhibition are held.
There are some reasons developing skyscraper is better than building houses and real estates. The high number of populations in a country might be one of the reasons. Building high apartments can be the way to solve it. It is believed that building skyscrapes may become the solution to reduce the land used and deforestation. In addition to it, unique and famous skyscraper might also attract huge number of tourists from other countries.
However, despite from its advantageous, skyscraper might be danger for some reasons. Some skyscrapers have a bad construction, or it is not certificated by the government yet. Many accidental problems might be happened in high building. Office's workers or hotel's guest are too hard to find a way out if there are earth quake happens even some skyscrapes provide emergency exit.
In the conclusion, building skyscrapes has become the way out to solve some huge problems. Neverthless, it must have built by professional and certificated construction. It must also have a steady foundation in order to reduce accidental problems happen. At last, a location of skyscraper should not built near the airport.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'quakes'?
Suggestion: quakes
...rd to find a way out if there are earth quake happens even some skyscrapes provide em...
^^^^^
Line 7, column 301, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'should' requires the base form of the verb: 'build'
Suggestion: build
...st, a location of skyscraper should not built near the airport.
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, whereas, even so, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1195.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10683760684 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94992233548 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568376068376 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 20.6850451716 49.4020404114 42% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.6875 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.625 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0 0.244688304435 0% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0 0.084324248473 0% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0 0.151304729494 0% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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