Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
In early 19th century , people thought car is a fad - it would never replace the trusty , hardworking horses. In the middle of the 19th century , people thoght television is a fad - it would never replace radio. In the early 20th century , people thoght computer is a fad - moreover it would make pople unemployed. The current situation is this one can ride the car while watching the movie. After computer innovation , market overwhelmed with multiple jobs.The revolutionalry innovation internet brings all the information available on a click away only. Now a days , we can use most of the technology based work from our own smart phone, we don't even need to sit in front of the computer or laptop .
Basically , technology has been evolved such a way to make our life easy. It depends on the person how he would use it. If one can extract the good of the technology he can direct his life in a better way.
Technology is used in our daily lives tremendously . From morning alarm to night cab drop , it exists everywhere to make our life smooth. Now a days common people dont have to wait in the queue to catch the cab , if they want , they can simply book the cab from their own smart phone. To buy groceries/food/garments people dont have to go to market always , if they want they can oder it from apps like Amazon, Flipkarts and many more.
Not only for shopping , nowadays people can consult with doctor over internet and all these information are available only a click away.
Technology has a great role in education. Teaching becomes realtime now , students can get feedback rapidly from their teachers. They can answer the questions and upload these into google docs. From this teacher can evaluate and provide the feedback. For reference teacher and students both can use extensive material available in the internet.
There is always pros and cons of a revolutionary innovation. Like that technology is also part of this. As all the source is available over the internet , student can simply copy and paste into answer script. In this case parents and teachers should make children aware of the misuse of the technology.
Actually , it depends on the people how they will use it. Technology is only betterment for the people if it can be used in a right way.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, moreover, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 11.3162921348 9% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 33.0505617978 103% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1878.0 2235.4752809 84% => OK
No of words: 392.0 442.535393258 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79081632653 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70247998295 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 215.323595506 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507653061224 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 704.065955056 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.2370786517 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 23.0359550562 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0677971934 60.3974514979 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 75.12 118.986275619 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.68 23.4991977007 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.56 5.21951772744 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 7.80617977528 372% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.83258426966 248% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105264051438 0.243740707755 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0330886294919 0.0831039109588 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0521065253291 0.0758088955206 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0521454644037 0.150359130593 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310732035039 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 14.1392134831 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 48.8420337079 132% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 12.1743820225 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.1639044944 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.38706741573 86% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 100.480337079 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 11.2143820225 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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