The flow chart below shows the three stages of glass bottle recycling.
The pictire illustrates the process in making and recycling bottle glass which is categorized into three stages.
Overall, the process start off when these bottles are collected for recycling and then sent to the factory to make new glass. After that, it will be sold to the supermarket where costumers buy it and so the process repeat again.
To begin with, the process starts at stage 1 wherein used glass bottles are collected for recycling. The customers first will have to drop off the used containers to the collecting point where the truck picks it up. After that, stage 2 is the step where brand new bottles are made. At first, once the truck received the used bottle, they will have to deliver these containers to the cleaning plant. In that place, the bottles are washed thoroughly using a high-pressurized water. Next to that, it will be segragated depending on its color (whether it is green, brown or clear). After clustering the bottles, it will be sent to the glass factory where they meticolously make a brand new glass container.
Turning to making of fragile bottles, first, it will be crushed into small pieces of glass for it to be easily liquified. After crushing it, these bits of glasses will be put into the heating furnace for several hours until it melt down and become watery in form. After that, it will be put on a glass mould and set it there to cool down and become solid again. Lastly, the brand new bottle will be removed from the mould and will be ready for the third stage of recycling.
Going to the final stage, once we have the finished product, these new containers will besent for filling/packing and will be sold to the supermarkets where they sell it back to the consumers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 216, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...ere costumers buy it and so the process repeat again. To begin with, the process starts a...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, lastly, so, then, third, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 7.0 243% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 1.00243902439 1197% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 27.0 5.60731707317 482% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 965.302439024 147% => OK
No of words: 303.0 196.424390244 154% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69636963696 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 3.73543355544 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47062274221 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 106.607317073 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.475247524752 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 424.8 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.8472021335 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8666666667 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26666666667 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156199861402 0.215688989381 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0707298768636 0.103423049105 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0665301296144 0.0843802449381 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102290679153 0.15604864568 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0499412563756 0.0819641961636 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 61.2550243902 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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