Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Television advertising directed towards young children (aged two to five) should not be allowed.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Multimedia implements are very effectual in children's lives. from many perspectives, TV is the most important one, these days. Although someone believes that television programs have no influence on children breeding, but others not. There are many crucial reasons illustrating the role of Television in the child's life.
Childhood is the most suspectable interval for contemplating children's behavior. Children who have not formed a strong understanding of right and wrong, imitating what they see. Characteristics of children making in the first ages of their life. Since the child copy these behaviors it influences on her manner in the future, too. for example, there was an advertising about candies. For demonstrating the influence of those candies in children's friendship, shown a kindergarten in which a child does wrong treatment, apologizing for that, baken one of that candies to her friend. Then they come in reconciliation. The child showing this advertisement, recognize that is allowed to do everything, after that she can apologize with a small candy. This feature intense in her behavior as she arising. accordingly, in intermediate school, her intrusive manner, repeatedly bother other students in the class. Eventually, a friend of her says to her "my friend instead of having disapproval manner and then apologize persistently, try to revise your personality and have affection for your friends. Therefore, it is more beneficial to not permitted seeing unsuitable announcements, and have many challenges to amend them.
A child learns hasty. Phycologists believe that a human in childhood gets everything by doing that again and again. Children are always the hero of stories that they shown. Many advertising programs have a hero who does what he wants in weird ways, and also behaviors may be exaggerated from what should be. For instance, It is possible, showed a man who would be best figured just by eating some special food or doing exercise. I remember an advertising in my childhood, it was about a man eaten some vegetables and then be a superman with great concentration, then walked on the corner of a building that suddenly, plunged. Despite, landing on asphalt was alive. I read in a newspaper that a child wanting to act as that man going on the apex of the building unintentionally declined and died.
Consequently, Not only does a child imitation manner cause learning mistreatment, cause experiencing catastrophic incident as well. The less unofficial announcement, the less ugly behavior will be learned.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, well, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.0752688172 136% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2151.0 1977.66487455 109% => OK
No of words: 404.0 407.700716846 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32425742574 4.8611393121 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16726757842 2.67179642975 119% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 212.727598566 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584158415842 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 657.0 618.680645161 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 5.0 3.08781362007 162% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.4000349537 48.9658058833 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.7307692308 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5384615385 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 5.45110844103 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.88709677419 184% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11306853478 0.236089414692 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0287295795995 0.076458572812 38% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029386377857 0.0737576698707 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0663865319645 0.150856017488 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331641869217 0.0645574589148 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 11.7677419355 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 86.8835125448 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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