do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
in any society, the contributions of scientists and engineers are more important than the contributions of artists and writers.
use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.
In any society all the majors and subjects have importance and all of them have their own usages and benefits. However, in some periods of time the significance of some specific majors appear. Nowadays, the contributions of scientists and engineers are more valuable. I will try to examine the below the particular reasons to illustrate my opinion.
First, let us think about the international and global communications. We spend a lot of our times in social networks and internet by using our mobile phone, laptop, computer, etc. all of them are the productions of mixture of science and engineering. These outputs help us to speak with our friends in each part of the world and make new friendships and be familiar with others cultures.
Second, how wonderful our trades and businesses in all over the world spread. Improving transport industry by using the science and engineering to make automobiles, airplanes, jets, trains and other things, help to increase trade and earn more money.
Third, time has been going and the needs of our lives and our societies is increasing. This causes making new industries and factories and all of them need laborers. You can understand easily that the job opportunities are increasing. The best results are achieving by making job for people. They can make their life and guarantee their children life. Furthermore, the next generations will be made without any worries.
Finally, these useful contributions improve the health of the society. For example, in the past a lot of children died because some fictions and diseases that there weren’t any treatments, drugs, vaccines, etc. even if they didn’t die, they became defective like losing one of their foot, hand and something like this but now by contributions of scientists and engineers, a lot of things discovered that help the health of societies. Also another awesome development is making internal and external artificial limbs that will save millions lives.
In conclusion, benefits of contributing science and engineering are incredible. Nowadays, we need artists and writers but not like the above majors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, if, second, so, third, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 15.1003584229 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1798.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 341.0 407.700716846 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27272727273 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92177492111 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 212.727598566 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58357771261 0.524837075471 111% => OK
syllable_count: 548.1 618.680645161 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.9492984228 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.7272727273 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5 20.6045352989 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.45454545455 5.45110844103 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159235541693 0.236089414692 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0459454912828 0.076458572812 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601558479585 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810309535602 0.150856017488 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0507172479165 0.0645574589148 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 11.7677419355 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 10.9000537634 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.01818996416 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.