Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
Childhood is a part of most of our lives and I am sure that each one of us has some moment to cherish from those days. The given topic is rather open ended and controversial when it says that childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. This would not be true for all of us since many of us may have been through catastrophic times when we were small which would have made childhood a nightmare for us. However, for me it was the happiest time of my life and would state a few reasons to support my position.
First, I feel that my present life as a youngster who is trying to pursue higher studies in the US is daunting as well as hectic. Most of the time I am always worried about what would happen next?, where would I land up in life? and these thoughts are not unusual. Moreover, this lead to unnecessary stress. Gone are the days when I had peace of mind. My primary task was to get out of my home and play with my friends in the locality. In this way I could focus on sports and other extra curricular. Moreover, the subjects to study were so easy that it would not take much time to complete my homework. Moreover, the number of vacations we used to have in school. In India we had three major vacations annually Diwali, Christmas and summer vacations. However, these perks are not available to me as a youngster.
Second, I have also known that as a child no one actually scolds or punishes unless and until the child misbehaves persistently. People usually care about us especially our family members. Being the youngest child, I was pampered by my parents and my sibling however, I didn't turn out to be a spoiled brat. Moreover, I used to get surprise gifts, birthday presents which made life even more satisfying. I was very obsessed with toy cars and used to play with them every single time and my parents made sure that I had them in abundance.Hence, I felt that my childhood was the best.
The above case may be true for most of us but some kids are not as lucky as I was. Most of the children especially girls are abandoned by their parents and left to die on the streets. Some on the other hands lose their parents at an early age and are left behind as orphans. Their yearn for love but no cares about them. Some children are even abused at an early age. Hence, I am thankful to God for such a great childhood.
In the end, people have their own opinions but I would like to say that childhood was the happiest time for me.
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- Some young adults want independence from their parents as soon as possible. Others prefer to live with their families for a longer time. Which of these situations do you think is better? Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. 66
- Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life. 70
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, so, well, as to, i feel, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 52.1666666667 111% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1988.0 1977.66487455 101% => OK
No of words: 464.0 407.700716846 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28448275862 4.8611393121 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.64119157421 4.48103885553 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.387495292 2.67179642975 89% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.502155172414 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 20.6003584229 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.6195357399 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6296296296 100.406767564 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1851851852 20.6045352989 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.62962962963 5.45110844103 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.85842293907 207% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200505712792 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0506320778806 0.076458572812 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0898115306124 0.0737576698707 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129558271902 0.150856017488 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982415267204 0.0645574589148 152% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 10.9000537634 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.56 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 86.8835125448 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 10.002688172 130% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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