Write a letter to your neighbor. In your letter
Describe the problem
Say how long it has been a problem
Explain what action you want the neighbor to take
Dear Mr.john,
I hope this letter find you in best of your health and spirit. I am miss.trupti bhanderi your neighbor, staying in banglow no. 3. I am writing this letter to show my dissatisfaction about the litter and rubbish thrown by your new maid near my house.
Your new maid does not know the rules of the society and because of lacking of this knowledge she always put the litter near my house corner. Because of this foul odour was created ,which brings an unpleasant and unhealthy feelings. the waste also created the sort of insects which dangerous and harmful for me and my family. The day when your new maid join the job I face this problem.
I just inform you to please make understand the rule of society to your homeworker and told her to throw the litter and rubbish in garbage van, not near my house. otherwise I have to make complain about this to the society.
I hope the action will taken by you very soon.
Your’s faithfully
Trupti bhanderi.
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| 2018-10-23 | trupti mavani | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...our neighbor, staying in banglow no. 3. I am writing this letter to show my dissa...
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Line 5, column 181, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
.... Because of this foul odour was created ,which brings an unpleasant and unhealthy...
^^
Line 5, column 234, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...s an unpleasant and unhealthy feelings. the waste also created the sort of insects ...
^^^
Line 7, column 153, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ter and rubbish in garbage van, not near my house. otherwise I have to make compl...
^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Otherwise
...ish in garbage van, not near my house. otherwise I have to make complain about this to t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 165, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: otherwise,
...ish in garbage van, not near my house. otherwise I have to make complain about this to t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 24, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[3]
Message: Did you mean 'take' or 'be taken'?
Suggestion: take; be taken
... the society. I hope the action will taken by you very soon. Your's faithf...
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Line 12, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...u very soon. Your's faithfully Trupti bhanderi.
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, sort of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.48453608247 13% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 814.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 175.0 206.0 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65142857143 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63713576256 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41631191391 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582857142857 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.4953440636 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9090909091 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.54545454545 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190465660264 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769079916936 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565244555754 0.0603063233224 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12016644961 0.12726935374 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677830399384 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 8.37731958763 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.