You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Today, modern society is generating an increasing amount of waste and the waste management has become one of the pressing issues both in developing and developed countries. This essay will discuss further on the reason for the rise in rubbish and what governments could to curtail wastes produced in the following paragraphs with examples.
Firstly. the global population has reached a staggering seven billion recently. Solid waste is a by-product of this phenomenon, a major cause for the rise in the amount of wastes nowadays. In addition, industrial wastes have also bulked to cater to the growing population. Thus, rise in number of people has a direct impact on the wastes produced. For instance, an average individual produces 2.6 pounds of wastes daily extrapolating it to the global level will yield an alarming 18 billion pounds of wastes. Furthermore, with increasing market demand the population number is expected to balloon to nine billion by 2050 triggering further increase in rubbish
This unsavory problem has taken center stage as the world focused on tackling waste management issue. One way that the government can help alleviate this burden on the environment is by educating the culprits – the general public. By promoting the use of reusable bags when shopping, the number of plastic bags can be greatly reduced. Also, the government can run advertisements and put up posters in ways that a household can reduce the trash it generates. Another step that the government may undertake is through sound recycling. For example, the government of Sweden has invested in technology to measure citizens carbon footprints and has also invested in the infrastructure such as recycle bins within 300 meters of residential areas to easy people’s efforts. The positive carbon footprints are rewarded monthly which is a tremendous success.
In conclusion, it is a fact that the human population and industrialization will continue to rise. For the world’s natural resources remain sustainable, the governments around the world and the public must cooperate to arrest the ever-present problem of growing rubbish.
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Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, may, so, thus, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 337.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.37388724036 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99955236793 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572700296736 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 558.0 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.7784400553 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.1875 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0625 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4375 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152981922335 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0461795406254 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527250351772 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918876481209 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319777685402 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 78.4519038076 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.