An increasing number of people are now using dating sites to meet their second halves. Do you think that this tendency helps people to socialize or does more harm than good?
Give your opinion. Provide relevant examples of necessary
In this day and age, there is an extremely high rate of individuals seeking soul mate via dating websites. In my opinion, in term of socializing, this phenomenon brings both disadvantages and advantages.
At the first glance, dating sites could pose a serious threat to it’s members. In fact, by creating a flawless couterfleit profile, Evil predators can easily swindle others, who is innocent and lack of caution on the internet, for money or sex purposes. This will causes an increasing of social crime. Moreover, online dating can impair face-to-face interaction. In point of fact, compared to those who meet their partner through traditional routes such as friend gatherings, in bar or at workplace, dating online users seem to find it more convinent and intriguing to enjoy a vitual meeting rather than meet in person, thereby leading a discouragement in real communition.
In contrast, dating website is a psychological crutch for singles who have a sense of shyness and fearfulness. As opposed to approaching someone in person, Online dating possesses a relaxed and less pressure atmosphere where introverted person can talk by sending a message or icons, therefore, reducing the awkwardness to cement a new relationship. Futhermore, through dating sites, people can achieve more opportunities to find a compatible match. It is because that thanks to the various members all over the world, users can meet quality people regardless of geographic distances which is one of burdensome barries in traditional dating methods.
In conclusion, although there may be some drawbacks, the benefits of dating website in conecting singles is obvious and can’t deny.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, so, therefore, in conclusion, in contrast, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41064638783 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07437433153 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.653992395437 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.838854659 49.4020404114 151% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.583333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9166666667 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170666583375 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0616702012279 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449319134634 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884303121384 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409056370083 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.2 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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