Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
In the past, young people depended too much on their parents to make decisions for them; today young people are better able to make decisions about their own lives.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Today's world, is more complex and development than ever before, and society has been changed and progressed a lot. Under this cicumstancies, young people stylelife also has been changed. One of them is related to making decisions. However, some people claim that still young people rely on their family to make decisions, but I strongly believe that young people are more independent than the past decades. In my opinion, technology and schools are two important factors that make young people independent. For supporting my claim, several reasons and examples are explained as the following.
First of all, nowadays, educational systems of schools are very development. Teachers teach students that how make a good decision. For example, when students want to select a partner for a teamwork, firstly, it is possible that they make a mistake. But, this mistake can help them to increase their experiences. Therefore, based on new experience they will be more cureful than ever before to choose a partner in the future. Because, he or she knows about different characteristics of the good partners. As a result, she or he can make decistion independently for finding a good partenr or even a friend.
Apart from discussion above, there is another facor has very great influence on the young people, it is technology. Actually, by developing tenchology people are able to get any information on the Internet easily. This point of view is the most important in my points of view. Because, the Internet can serve as a double-edged sword. In the other word, it can increase knowledge of young people and they can use other people experiences on the Internet to make their own decision without parents. However, the Internet is not very reliable, there are many fake news and knoweladge. For example, from my own experience, when I wanted to select a good university for my bachelor, I searched in different kind of websites. There were many positive of negative things about different universities in my country. Therefore, I were able to make a good desicion without my parents.
Having considered all the discussion above, I am realy sure that young people are more independent that the past. Because, in addition to their parents, there are many things to help them for their decisions. They can see anything from different angles to make a decisions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 552, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[4]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much fake news', 'a good deal of fake news'.
Suggestion: much fake news; a good deal of fake news
...nternet is not very reliable, there are many fake news and knoweladge. For example, from my ow...
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Line 7, column 262, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a decision' or simply 'decisions'?
Suggestion: a decision; decisions
... anything from different angles to make a decisions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, apart from, for example, in addition, kind of, as a result, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1971.0 1977.66487455 100% => OK
No of words: 389.0 407.700716846 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06683804627 4.8611393121 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44106776838 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83908460571 2.67179642975 106% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503856041131 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 627.3 618.680645161 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.1532828806 48.9658058833 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.84 100.406767564 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.56 20.6045352989 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36 5.45110844103 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 11.8709677419 126% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304162703042 0.236089414692 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779782964056 0.076458572812 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0708361667384 0.0737576698707 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194385255918 0.150856017488 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674984339101 0.0645574589148 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 11.7677419355 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 58.1214874552 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.1575268817 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.01818996416 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 86.8835125448 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.002688172 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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