Some people claim that it is acceptable to use animals in medical research for the benefit of human beings while other people argue that it is wrong. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, many hold the view that we should allow people to do researches on animals for medical use.However there is a body of opinion which claims that these experiments should be opposed. In this essay I will examine both sides of the debate to seek a conclusion.
To begin with, it is undeniable that doing researches on animals ensure the security of medicines,since scientists are able to know whether the components of medicines may cause some negative effects to patients or not after verifying from the tests. In addition, doing experiments on animals can improve the efficiency of developing medical treatment, as they can try some experiments which are dangerous to humans. For example, when scientists need to exploit an unknown type of chemical, they had better test on animals in case the humans lose their lives.
On the other hand, however, it is inhumane to test medicines on animals. This is because such experiments have deprived a lot of lives of innocent animals, which is disrespectful to livestock, taking their basic right away. Furthermore, it is very inconvenient for scientists to use animals for tests. Compared with human, the animals cannot communicate with scientists about how they feel after having medicines, which needs scientists to observe them for a long time to get a accurate solution.
To summarize, there is no doubt that doing experiments on animals is a good way to ensure the security of medicine and improve efficiency of developing medical treatment. At the same time, however, it is also inhumane and inconvenient for scientists. In the final analysis, therefore, one can only conclude that I support to stop medical researches on animals.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, for example, in addition, no doubt, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1417.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13405797101 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94142877793 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56884057971 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2576666375 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.083333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223140095431 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765312592754 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0700862885967 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140852598778 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.070881519642 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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