Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
These Days, Humans seem to be either satisfied or worried about the impact of artificial intelligence. From my point of view, these developments have both merits and drawbacks, as this essay will demonstrate.
It is undeniable that the increasing intelligence of technology has facilitated our life in many ways. Firstly, the productivities of advanced manufacturing technology would have been significantly increasing than that of the human. Indeed, smart machines which are set of highly flexible can produce high-quality products with exact specifications and do multiple tasks all at the same time. Secondly, technological smart will also add benefits to our whole society, by providing transportation to people who are otherwise not able to drive or physical impairments. In fact, self-driving cars are used to handle a multitude of simple and complex driving situations without a person’s control. This leads to help people's less risk of accidents as well as more safety. By doing these, there would not only have more convenient for humans but also improve humans’ quality of life.
However, I share the concerns of people who believe that artificial intelligence may harm us if we are not careful. First of all, The rise in unemployment as workers could be replaced at work by machines or even robots. In particular, drivers will lose their job due to the invention of self-driving cars. In addition, Many breakthroughs in the industry of technology, such as the introduction of computers, make people become a lack of progress on soft skills. As people rely too much on them, there would be a high chance of people losing the ability to interact with each other. More dangerously, Perhaps computers could take over humans, by making decision capabilities or even using those power in order to harm us if we do not be unnoticed.
In conclusion, intelligent machines will no doubt bring benefits to humans’ life while the potential risks of such technologies should be ignored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, in particular, no doubt, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1947.0 1615.20841683 121% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 5.192 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09798959901 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597333333333 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.7563924847 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.473684211 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7368421053 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21052631579 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.393529546321 0.244688304435 161% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114138632927 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.171161515368 0.0667982634062 256% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246263697116 0.151304729494 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.271422499306 0.056905535591 477% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.