Young people enjoy life more than older people do.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... enjoy in that But the older people just stick to one thing and continue with tha...
^^
Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...k to one thing and continue with that. Firstly, the young people have more ener...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...more energy than the older people. They does not want to miss any single moment in t...
^^^^
Line 2, column 321, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'plays'.
Suggestion: plays
...who have interest in basket ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing ...
^^^^
Line 2, column 338, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... in basket ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing that game and does no...
^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 348, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: He
... ball and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing that game and does not mi...
^^
Line 2, column 351, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'enjoys'.
Suggestion: enjoys
...ll and he play basket ball everyday. he enjoy playing that game and does not miss eve...
^^^^^
Line 2, column 412, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...me and does not miss even a single day. Also he is a topper of his college even by p...
^^^^
Line 2, column 468, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...per of his college even by playing game everyday. The older people does not h...
^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...college even by playing game everyday. The older people does not have much drea...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 42, Rule ID: MUCH_COUNTABLE[1]
Message: Use 'many' with countable nouns.
Suggestion: many
... The older people does not have much dreams or goals to achieve. They just f...
^^^^
Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
... a school girl who have a goal to enter a best college and she also wants to go a...
^
Line 3, column 514, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...st she got success in getting seat into a best college and went to abroad for hig...
^
Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and went to abroad for higher studies. Therefore, the younger people enjoy thei...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, for example

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 15.1003584229 7% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 9.8082437276 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.0752688172 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1112.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 254.0 407.700716846 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37795275591 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.48103885553 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.94421232378 2.67179642975 73% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 212.727598566 56% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472440944882 0.524837075471 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 338.4 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.7955481585 48.9658058833 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.5 100.406767564 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5625 5.45110844103 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.5376344086 253% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.480421537819 0.236089414692 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192100643743 0.076458572812 251% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.192891592023 0.0737576698707 262% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.388960559208 0.150856017488 258% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.176786535504 0.0645574589148 274% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 11.7677419355 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 58.1214874552 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 10.1575268817 55% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.83 10.9000537634 72% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.25 8.01818996416 78% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:

para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.

So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:

reasons == advantages or

reasons == disadvantages

for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.

Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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