There are many different types of music in the world today. Why do we need music? Is the traditional music of a country more important than the international music that is heard everywhere nowadays?
music is a beautiful language that people around the world can communicate with each other. Some music c
can inspire and encourage people who is going through difficulties in life and it also can cure and comfort
people in daily life.
A country's traditional music represents its culture, development, civilization and people's life in that
country. The traditional music in a country is more like the food in that country, which has its own style
and unique features. However, the international music can be shared worldwide which allows people to build
similar aesthetic on it. Therefore, I think as for a country, it is important to keep their traditional music.
As an audience, I think both kind of music are amazing.
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also, however, if, so, therefore, as for, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 13.0 41.998997996 31% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 627.0 1615.20841683 39% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 315.596192385 38% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 4.20363070211 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88298295838 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 176.041082164 45% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 192.6 506.74238477 38% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6876208814 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2857142857 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313374712819 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166644623232 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453335988902 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144324158096 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0891005774769 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 78.4519038076 36% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.