The bar chart below shows the percentage of of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women in six different age groups who were engaged in regular physical activity in Australia in 2010.
Overall, proportion of both men and women varied among different age groups starting from 15 years to 65 years and above, who did physical activity regularly. Higher proportion of women performed physical activity on regular basis compared to men except in age group 15 to 24 years. Almost equal number of both these groups who were 65 years and above did exercise daily.
More specifically, males in the age group of 15 to 24 years were more involved in regular exercise that is 52.8% compared to females (47.7%). On the contrary, women between 25 to 34 years and 55 to 64 years were ahead of men with a difference of 7-8% who did physical activity daily. While in the age group of 35 to 44 years and 45 to 54 years this difference got slightly raised to 10-13%, with 52.5% and 53.3% of women and 39.5% and 43.1% of men respectively, who did regular workouts. Approximately 47% of both men and women who were 65 years and above reported of doing daily exercise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 30, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The bar chart illustrates the percentage of men and women in six diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 923.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.63819095477 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54984401531 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.472361809045 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 278.1 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5109590284 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.375 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.875 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32889958976 0.215688989381 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182824255367 0.103423049105 177% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104655593734 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.297054093925 0.15604864568 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0925769421888 0.0819641961636 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.45 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.