Scientists and news media are presenting the evidences of climate change. Governments cannot be expected to solve this problem. It is the responsibility of individuals to change their lifestyle to prevent further damage. What are your views?
These days governments around the world seem busy discussing the environmental issues and devising ways to solve them. However, there is a debate among the people that whether individual should change the life style or it is the responsibility of government to address the problem. In my opinion, active participation of both is essential for the success of any initiative aimed at curbing this problem.
To begin with, several steps can be taken by government to improve environmental conditions. Firstly, industries are responsible for the large proportion of green house gas emission and it can be controlled by government’s actions, as government can take measures to discourage pollution by limiting or taxing the use of fossil fuels. Alternatively, subsidies can be provided to industries for clean up production process and by this business will link pollution to profitability. Secondly, it is necessary to conduct discussions between governments to ensure that measures taken are successful. For example, impact of environmental destruction in one country may affect many nations not only the culprit, so cooperation is needed to reduce environmental destruction.
However, individuals also have big part to play in environmental protection. All national and international polices made for environment only succeed when individuals cooperate and change their lifestyle. To illustrate, people can reduce electricity use by installing efficient light bulbs and electrical appliances or installing solar panels. In addition, changing transportation attitude, by travelling short distances by cycle or walk, people can save lot of fossil fuel and prevent pollution.
To recapitulate, with combination of international cooperation, government initiatives and individual participation further damage to environment can be reduced if not stopped.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 22.0 8.3376753507 264% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.88191881919 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48967474453 2.80592935109 124% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638376383764 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3382640057 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.615384615 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.92307692308 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169671442716 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602328684915 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410635155598 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108232088955 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292031821302 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.8 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.