A rise in the standard of living in a country often only seems to benefits cities rather than rural areas. What problems might this differences cause? How might these problems be reduced?
It is true that because the rapid development of economy of a country, people have a higher standard of living. This made the gap between cities and rural areas is wider than the past. This phenomenon leads to negative effects, and there are some solutions to tackle this problem.
The great difference between city and countryside will cause some problem. I believe that overpopulation in metropolis is the biggest issue. This is because a large proportion of people in undeveloped areas will move to cities in order to find a better life. The population density is overcrowded would leads to many consequences such as increasing cost of living, traffic jam, environmental pollution,… Besides, it is difficult for local authorities to manage due to the fact that the rate of crime becomes increasing.
Despite the consequences of this development, Government can take some steps to mitigate the potential problems. First of all, Government should spend a deal of money to invest for undeveloped areas. I believe that infrastructure and education are needed to improve most. In addition to this, to encourage the investment from foreign companies, some policies should be set up. If these companies may build or remove some factories in rural areas, a lot of people will have job and increase income. As a result, because citizen can afford to have a better living, they will not need to come to big cities in order to earn money.
In conclusion, Government could certainly to implement a range of measures to reduce the consequences which this phenomenon causes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 303, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'lead'
Suggestion: lead
...population density is overcrowded would leads to many consequences such as increasing...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , …
...ng, traffic jam, environmental pollution,… Besides, it is difficult for local auth...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'jobbed'.
Suggestion: jobbed
... rural areas, a lot of people will have job and increase income. As a result, becau...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, if, may, so, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1313.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08914728682 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94532075811 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589147286822 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.1905062227 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166179982913 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573571724033 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0550882882147 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0999107084819 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416744583145 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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