People should look after their health for personal benefits, rather than a duty for a society.
Nowadays, a great deal or research has been done about the connection between people health condition and their satisfaction of life. Some commentators believe that people should care about their health as a social responsibility. Although there are some truth about this idea, it is true to say that the immediate benefits of healthy lifestyle contribute to the people.
First of all, I should be highlighted that promoting a healthy lifestyle among people brings with it several positive consequences. Improving the immunity system and increasing the energy level are some of them which result in increased life expectancy and positive attitude toward the life. Lifelong of people boost significantly and they will be able to protect themselves from fatal disease. As a result, those expenses that are associated with health problems will decline considerably.
On the other hand, from a social standpoint, it is evident that the beneficial impact of a healthy lifestyle will contribute to the public welfare. It refers to the amount of national budget which is allocated to health care system by government. In a more healthy society, this money can be spent on recreational programs or developed education facilities which leads to more satisfaction and makes a lot of sense for individuals. Besides, the standard of lie would increase which can act as a motivation, improving the positive inspiration.
Taking everything into consideration, it seems that people should care about their health situation both for themselves and their society, because their health play a key role in promoting public welfare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1370.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3937007874 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97289718561 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.562992125984 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2559808241 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.166666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.207428291946 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715256427781 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848746273441 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14091330819 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0931958307083 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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