TPO- test9- technology has made children less creative than they were in the past
Today different technology surround us everywhere and this is impossible to deny it. Definitely, our life has changed dramatically because of it. The question is how does it influence our society? I firmly believe that technology destroys children’s imagination.
First, today’s child has not to create anything because all content is ready-made. There are too many games, computer programs, cartoons and joys. children only consume them, and they got used to this. it means that their possibility to imagine has been demolished. For example, at holidays my brother stays always at home and watch YouTube channels. When he paints, he can only copy the heroes of favorite cartoons and comics. His classmates do the same. they just cannot imagine anything new.
The next reason is the decline of socialization. today’s children prefer to seat at home alone in front of their computer or television instead of playing on the ground. technology replaces face-to-face communications which has the impact on the ability to establish good contacts with new people. While it is a fact that socialization in the childhood is one of the most important part of our life to get new experience and to enrich ourselves, the absence of this period may make children less creative and less ready to adulthood.
Finally, since nowadays both of parents work, they also benefit from new technology and the ready-made content. Thus, mother and father may find any entertainment for their child via the Internet. it facilitates their life and allows to spend less time by playing with children and teaching them. No doubt, it has a negative effect on their children.
To sum it, despite all advantages of modern technology, it has too many shortcomings. So, technology makes children less creative and worsen their ability to imagine and invent new things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nment for their child via the Internet. it facilitates their life and allows to sp...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, may, so, thus, while, as to, for example, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 36.0 43.0788530466 84% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1977.66487455 79% => OK
No of words: 299.0 407.700716846 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21739130435 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9235552137 2.67179642975 109% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61872909699 0.524837075471 118% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 618.680645161 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0988849698 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5909090909 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.45454545455 5.45110844103 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.85842293907 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205823495637 0.236089414692 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051292556951 0.076458572812 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589260864905 0.0737576698707 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116299884372 0.150856017488 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031509277296 0.0645574589148 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 10.9000537634 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 86.8835125448 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 10.002688172 50% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.