Essay topics: The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Essay topics:

Essay topics: The chart below gives information about Southland's main exports in 2000, 2018, and future projections for 2025.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart illustrates International tourist , Dairy products and Meat products were main exports to till now in 2000 to 2018 and projection for 2025.

As an overall, it is clear that all the year Meat products decreased slightly from 2000 to 2018 and the trend will be continued in future while similarly way international tourism have increased Between 2000 and 2018 and it'll keep it up in 2025.

In 2000, international tourism was the highest exports at above 8 billion than dairy products and meat product. The figure was at just under 7 billion and 6 billion respectively.There was a near 10 billion dairy products exports from southland while international tourism exported just under 9 billion and approximately 5.5 billion exported for meat products in 2018.On the other hand, there was a significant fall of meat products between 2000 and 2018 and it will be continue it's decreasing trend at 5 billion in 2025.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, similarly, so, while, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 773.0 965.302439024 80% => OK
No of words: 155.0 196.424390244 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98709677419 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.52844152537 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.949964898 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 84.0 106.607317073 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541935483871 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 210.6 283.868780488 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 22.4926829268 169% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.013979406 43.030603864 265% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 193.25 112.824112599 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.75 22.9334400587 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.75 5.23603664747 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148854946173 0.215688989381 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113526855632 0.103423049105 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636409877887 0.0843802449381 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134333283756 0.15604864568 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0599230276247 0.0819641961636 73% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.4 13.2329268293 162% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.83 61.2550243902 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 10.3012195122 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 11.4140731707 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.9970731707 156% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 11.0658536585 145% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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