Some teachers think that international student exchange would be beneficial for all teenage school students. Do you think its advantages will outweigh the disadvantages?
Thanks to the development of globalization, young generations now have opportunities to interact with foreign peers. While it is true that this activity brings many merits for teenagers in terms of self-improvement, I believe that it could impact to the economy growth of a nation.
To begin with, there are several major benefits when adolescents study abroad. First of all, since learners have a chance to interact with foreigner, they would gain more experiences from different cultures. Therefore, could improve their personal skills such as communication and broaden their knowledge. In addition, this international exchange project could also be beneficial for students on the future. To be more specific, well-paid jobs often require employees who have a diverse profile with a wide network of activities.
Turning to the alternative side, the downside of this organization overshadows its advantages for two primary reasons. The main short coming stem from the high expenditure on transportation which could lead to a budget deficit for a nation. Consequently, it could negatively effect on other essential sectors such as medical or household.
Another reason would be the environmental problems. Since the travelling stage of this program require a great deal of transportation, corresponding for an enormous amount of exhausted carbon dioxide. This could cause many kinds of pollution, especially atmospheric pollution. As a result, young generation may have to suffer from this problem which would ruin their physical health and lead to various diseases.
To recapitulate, it is undeniable that the international students exchange program is extremely beneficial for teenagers in terms of personal-development. However, I strongly believe that this program could harm the environment as well as human’s well-being and the governments should also concern about other sectors.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in short, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68309859155 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32975738891 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619718309859 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.9335247037 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.875 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.75 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152816745927 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530055958941 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0678454046749 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0830525124209 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0364669669116 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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