Some young people look forward to a year of travelling ,a gap year,before they begin work or university and see it as a chance to broaden their horizons.For others this is an expensive waste of time .Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Recently,the young generation would like to try a ga...
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...eir living or studying in universities. they think it is an opportunity that they ca...
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... experience various culture and customs.However,some people believe that it is an usel...
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...useless thing and will waste their time.In my opinion,I agree with the former view...
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... essay will discuss it. To begin with,it is very beneficial for ones social and ...
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...ial for ones social and personal growth.First,for young people,they do not have time ...
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...or ones social and personal growth.First,for young people,they do not have time to p...
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...d personal growth.First,for young people,they do not have time to practice their soca...
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...ctice their socail skills in the campus.For example,most people will enter the work...
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...pend more time to adapt new environment.As a result of this,many young people will...
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...dapt new environment.As a result of this,many young people will choose to escape the ...
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...le will choose to escape the problem and change their work again and again. Meanw...
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...ge their work again and again. Meanwhile,taking the gap year will improve their career ...
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...fference to future employment prospects.With the development of diversification,empl...
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...-cultural job candidates. Neverthless,thera are some disadvantages that need to be ...
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...e disadvantages that need to be focused.On the one hand, it will spend much money....
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...nts, they do not have working experience . So ,they cannot work and travel at the ...
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...her hand, when people will be travelling , they will face unknown risk. But,dealin...
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...lling , they will face unknown risk. But,dealing with risk is a special experience and c...
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...ntributes their growth. In conclusion,it is worth to taking the gap year for som...
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...ture and help them to make more friends.Also,some drawbacks should not be igonored.
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... and help them to make more friends.Also,some drawbacks should not be igonored.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4453125 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.55749770435 2.80592935109 127% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61328125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 111.450257963 49.4020404114 226% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.4 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.6 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 32.0 5.01903807615 638% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295087273472 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120327216093 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573081848539 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184468848686 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0609845375395 0.056905535591 107% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.89 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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