Some people think that men are naturally more competitive than women.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Few decades ago, in most of the countries men were dominating in all industries such as government administration, business leaders and space research sectors. However, at present women are occupying top roles in various organizations, on the other side, some people assume men are more competitive than women. In my opinion, I strongly disagree to this thought, women perform extremely well in professional and educational exams when compare to men. Also, of late women are occupying top roles in various government and private companies, which shows they outperform men in many aspects.
Firstly, every year when government declare public exam results, women attain top 3 positions then compare to men. For instance, the recently concluded all India Chartered exams results show that top 5 ranks are attained by women, which signifies that they more competitive than men. Most importantly, patience is the key in the competitive world, where women possess more patience than men, which help them to take wise decision during crucial situations. Additionally, they also have never give up attitude which helps them to work hard to reach the goals.
Secondly, balancing personal and professional life are key for any working professionals. Many researchers suggest men are not capable in managing life than women. For example, current defence minister MRS. Nirmal Seetharaman does fantastic job in assigned responsibilities, where many important leaders have appreciated her decisioning skill during conflicts with neighbouring countries.
Finally, women perform smart work when compare to men, which help them complete the assigned duties more efficiently than men. Late chief minister, Miss Jayalalitha considered to be as iron lady for her administrating capabilities. Thus, it has been assumed based on the above facts, women are more competitive than men in every aspect.
In conclusion, mental endurance and relentless hard work are key attributes of competitive nature, where many women leaders have shown such skills in their duties for these reasons, I certainly believe women are more competitive than men.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1807.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94317945859 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.0739470173 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.9375 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.3125 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5625 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270167410383 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0978345987171 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875693679216 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165965213657 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580308893544 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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