Some people think the government should pay for healthcare and education but other people claim that it is the individual’s responsibility. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
In recent years, due to the development in most countries, educational and medical quality have been improved considerably and it is thought that government should pay for these services because every people have to pay a large amount of money for taxes and it is also common in some countries which have a high standard of living. Like me. Conversely, others argue that each person must be responsible on their demand because it would be better if government invest money on society especially poverty and some people probably become less responsible.
First of all, the most reason ,that some people argue government should spent money for healthcare and education, is that they have to spent ample amount of taxes (like personal,vehicle taxes or VAT,…) for their state each month or even in each trading activity. For instance, if a person want to buy a new car, they have to pay VAT, registration as well as road taxes. Moreover, free educational and medical services are pretty popular in modern countries particularly Western countries; so the quality of human’s life is improved significantly.
On the other hand, in some developing countries, the percentage of poverty is still high and the infrastructure or facility are less developed. Consequently, government should invest more to upgrade those kinds of thing because it is the most important condition to develop country. Paying money for those services by government can make some people become irresponsible for work because in reality, they think that government will pay anything so they do not need to make an effort to earn more money.
In conclusion, spending money on educational and medical service are not only the responsibility of government but also of each individual. Therefore, the government must balance the financial resource to improve the standard of living suitably.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, conversely, first, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1573.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26086956522 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97141333568 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.1157710965 49.4020404114 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.3 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9 20.7667163134 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.8 7.06120827912 224% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258577075715 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0880466610928 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601872134492 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159550963277 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0539127576873 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.3 13.0946893788 140% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.82 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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