Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
In the modern age, taking care of children is considered as one of the most essential tasks in the world. Therefore, many people believe that it is advisable for all parents to participate in parenting courses. While joining those classes could bring considerable merits, I also hold that it should be optional because there are also other effective alternative methods.
On the one hand, it is beneficial for parents to take part in parenting classes for several reasons. Firstly, learning those courses, parents could be equipped with suitable upbringing methods researched carefully by experts from basic level to the professional level. That is significantly important due to the fact that newbies who have never had experienced in raising children may have inappropriate parenting methods, which could probably drive to some tremendous consequences for the children such as their aggressive behaviors and selfishness. Secondly, parents joining the courses could expand their networks with other mothers and fathers in order that they can share tips and experiences to have better care for their children.
On the other hand, I think participating in parenting courses should be optional and many other ways could be more effective. Despite the merits of those courses, it seems impossible to required every parent to take part in probably due to limited financial conditions, locations and time. For example, people in remote areas who find it difficult to make ends meet appear to fail to afford the courses. Therefore, it is governments that should allocate funds run programs to raise awareness about the importance of children care. Moreover, the internet and books could be wonderful free sources for parents to enhance their knowledge about that issue. Finally, asking for advice from older people who have experience in bringing up children themselves could also be an effectual solution.
In conclusion, taking training courses could bring numerous advantages for parents, I believe that there are also alternative ways to enhance their parenting skills.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: there are other; there are also
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...so other effective alternative methods. On the one hand, it is beneficial for pa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1756.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43653250774 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77709841196 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554179566563 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 541.8 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7458038669 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.428571429 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0714285714 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9285714286 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213330755113 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814737967539 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.028176175342 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139137896742 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329835411854 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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