A letter to your friend traveling overseas. You are staying at their apartment and there was a storm.
Tell your friend about the storm.
Tell them what was damaged and details what repairs need to be done.
Dear Anna,
How your trip is going? Thank you for letting me to stay in your flat while you are abroad.
I regret to bother you during your vacation in Thailand but it is a matter of urgency. I am writing to inform you that yesterday a storm was passing by and unfortunately, it caused some damage in your penthouse.
In fact, the storm happened so suddenly that I was not ready for it and the weather forecast said that it would be sunny without a cloud. Anyway, I was reading a book on a terrace when a wind started to blow violently and the sky suddenly became dark. It was so scary that I run straight inside and a moment later, I had heard a loud bang behind.
When everything was quiet, I realized that the large glass window entering to the terrace was broken. As well as some stuff was wrecked on the terrace such as a small glass table and pots with rose bushes. Thus, the glass on the window and the table should be replaced and as roses were destroyed, you need to buy new ones. By the way, I have removed all broken glass and a litter from the terrace and it look like normal again.
Do not worry and enjoy yourself as I have already invited a master to deal with the window in order to repair it. When you come back, we will go to the market and choose new flowers for you. It is a good chance to purchase an unusual plant for the terrace.
Take care of yourself.
Bye, yours Maria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t caused some damage in your penthouse. In fact, the storm happened so suddenly ...
^^^
Line 8, column 406, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'looks'?
Suggestion: looks
...ss and a litter from the terrace and it look like normal again. Do not worry and...
^^^^
Line 14, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ke care of yourself. Bye, yours Maria
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
anyway, but, look, so, thus, well, while, in fact, such as, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1146.0 937.175257732 122% => OK
No of words: 270.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24444444444 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.16935888451 2.54303337028 85% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 127.690721649 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585185185185 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 352.8 290.88556701 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.0579319662 44.8134815571 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.625 76.5299724578 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.875 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 4.34317383033 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 1.49484536082 535% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218761342957 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671799323886 0.0766984524023 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534822169916 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0993860144071 0.12726935374 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688796935884 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.02 8.71597938144 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.83 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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