Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films need to be seen in a cinema.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, People could get easily access to some movies or TV programs by their smartphones and tablets. Whether some people think that people do not need to see a movie in movie theatre, I believe it is more than benefits to see a movie at the movie theatre.
It is convenience to see a movie through smartphones or tablets. We can watch the movie whenever we want and wherever we want. For example, people who don’t have time for the movie, to see a movie through these gadgets, can easily access movie when they commute school or work on bus or subway. Furthermore this way is cheaper than see a movie at cinema. We could pay only 10 dollar for millions of movie and related contents through Netflix or Amazon TV.
However, there are some benefits for watch movie at movie theatre. First, people can watch with high-quality sounds and wide screen. Recently, most cinemas have upgraded their screens and chairs for 3D, 4D and IMAX quality movies which people can feel more about movie. For example, 3D and IMAX qualities have more reality that people can feel with shaking chair when they see the action or adventure film. Secondly, Going for movie at cinema is good for dating and hanging out friends. The screen of Smartphones and tablets are quite small to watch for 2 or more people. In contrast,
In my opinion, I prefer to watch movie at the theatre than watch through a smartphone or tablet. Even though movie with using those gadgets are convenience, I want more concentrate and enjoy with wide screen and high quality surrounding sounds.
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| 2020-01-23 | Anathena | 73 | view |
| 2020-01-21 | maria001 | 78 | view |
| 2020-01-06 | Saeed Najd Ataei | 89 | view |
| 2020-01-06 | Saeed Najd Ataei | 89 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Furthermore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, second, secondly, so, for example, in contrast, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1287.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73161764706 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39398655065 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.525735294118 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.9844411731 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124173922572 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0532627005206 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029233813802 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808723486172 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0319466248818 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.