Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?It is more enjoyable to have a job where you work only three days a week for long hours than to have a job where you work five days a week for shorter hours. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer
Nowadays, different companies have different working systems. Some people argues that three days with long working time a week is better than five days with short time, because people could have longer weekends and do whatever they like. From my perspective, however, working too long a day is not a wise idea.
Firstly, long time and irregular work may be detrimental to our health. If you want to use three days to complete the five days work, then you must sit on the chair all day long dealing with your paper, which can be really harmful to your body, especially the spine. And if unlunckily you have some healthy problems, then it will waste you much more time to go to hospitals and receive treatment. Effectively, it is not cost-effecitve. When I was in my high school, I was always studying all day long without rest and exercise, and now I often have backache which is really annoying and affects both my daily life and work. I am so regretful that I did not pay attention to my health in the past.
Moreover, the quality of our work may be lower compared to the long days work. Obviously, when we are very eager to finish something in a short time, we often only go for time and speed and ignore the quality of work. Our work may be full of mistakes resulting from careless. Imagine you are a boss, do you want that to happen? On the contrary, if you have more days to work, then you will feel much more relaxed so that everything can be cheked out carefully.
Admittedly, it is probably true that three days work a week will leave you much more time to arrange other things such as tourism. However, the advantages of the other system still far outweigh the single benefit of short days work because it is impossible for you to go traveling every week, and most people have five week including your friends, who cannot stay with you. As a result, most of weeks of the year, you may just stay at home alone feeling bored.
To put all into a nutshell, it is my firm belief that working five days a week for shorter hours is better becuase of the regular work time and relaxed mind witch will make you more healthy and your work more well completed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 462, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...everything can be cheked out carefully. Admittedly, it is probably true that thr...
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Line 7, column 320, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...g every week, and most people have five week including your friends, who cannot stay...
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Line 7, column 388, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the weeks') or simply say ''most weeks''.
Suggestion: most of the weeks; most weeks
... who cannot stay with you. As a result, most of weeks of the year, you may just stay at home ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, well, as to, such as, as a result, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 15.1003584229 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 9.8082437276 133% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 52.1666666667 75% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1977.66487455 90% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.4685138539 4.8611393121 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32563418952 2.67179642975 87% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.493702770781 0.524837075471 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 547.2 618.680645161 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.5420412361 48.9658058833 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 100.406767564 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0555555556 20.6045352989 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 5.45110844103 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.85842293907 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440704017403 0.236089414692 187% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144761229082 0.076458572812 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0893438489999 0.0737576698707 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.281523244206 0.150856017488 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0238837453369 0.0645574589148 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 58.1214874552 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.1575268817 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 10.9000537634 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.247311828 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.