You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
describe the problem with the equipment
explain how this problem is affecting your work
say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to draw your immediate attention towards the problem I am facing with the keyboard of brand ‘Dell’. I bought it from your ‘Dell Hardware’ shop on 31st March with invoice number 3657, which I intended to use for my work purpose.
Initially, for few days it worked fine. However, yesterday, when I was working on some reports, then to my surprise, some of the keys were not working therefore, I was unable to complete my work.
I need to prepare these urgent reports for my current project and the deadline to send is 8th April. I am afraid I might not be able to deliver it on time due to this issue. Unfortunately, I am working from home, so hardware team of my office is unreachable. Therefore, I need you to send a technician who can urgently fix this device. Alternately, if not fixed, could you replace it with another keyboard? as it is covered under warranty against any manufacturing defects for a period of one year.
Hoping for your prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Pushpa
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...g on some reports, then to my surprise, some of the keys were not working therefore, I was ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 408, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...d you replace it with another keyboard? as it is covered under warranty against an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, then, therefore, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79891304348 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91992515344 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.66847826087 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 271.8 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.918770175 44.8134815571 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.5833333333 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3333333333 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292910182706 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.096010746256 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570804956226 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156552667754 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563137717852 0.0580467560999 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 8.37731958763 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 70.7449484536 91% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.