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some people think newspaper is the most effective way to obtain the latest information because it has more influence than other forms of media.

Numerous people believe that one of the best ways to derive the newest information is by reading newspaper. In comparing to other media forms, newspaper has more impact. In my perspective, the better way to receive the recent information is not only by reading newspaper but also by using other media forms. This essay will explain further information about my perspectives. <o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>First and foremost, another media form that is able to make people acquiring the latest information is by having gadget. In this modern era, gadget is one of the primary necessities for people. Moreover, it has countless functions which are capable of helping people to finish their various activities such as assisting people to derive several new knowledges which they need and additionally, aiding people connected to their relatives or other people. <o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>Second but not less crucial is television, it is one of the other media forms which isare capable of helping people to derive countless news. In particular, the people who like to watch television were able to receive various intelligences by watching news and films on television. <o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>Even though, there are other media forms which can aid people to get overwhelming knowledges, newspaper still has its own role to confer people countless informations. Typically, the people who are unable to use gadget and television. <o:p></o:p><o:p> </o:p>Thus, I believe that newspaper is not the only media forms for people to derive a lot of sciences, nevertheless there is also other media forms which are capable of bestowing the same things and those media forms are gadget and television. By having all of these media forms, People are rapidly able to have the newest and recent fact about everything that happened in the world.<o:p></o:p>

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, thus, in particular, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 4635.0 1615.20841683 287% => Less number of characters wanted.
No of words: 583.0 315.596192385 185% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 7.95025728988 5.12529762239 155% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91379618374 4.20363070211 117% => OK
Word Length SD: 6.77493583058 2.80592935109 241% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.303602058319 0.561755894193 54% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 1117.8 506.74238477 221% => syllable counts are too long.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 20.2975951904 315% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 435.919150959 49.4020404114 882% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 515.0 106.682146367 483% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.7777777778 20.7667163134 312% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.3333333333 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0552428927281 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0718406157085 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761671167137 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0552428927281 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.4 13.0946893788 370% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -18.86 50.2224549098 -38% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 22.9 7.44779559118 307% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 29.72 12.4159519038 239% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.0 9.78957915832 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 10.1190380762 273% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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