Reading a book is better than watching a television
The topic of this part, is a very controversial issue. For writing my response, I need more details, such as what you mean by saying television? Does it contain private channels? I agree with the statement and I will explain for you some reasons in the following essay.
To begin with, I have to emphasize that reading some kinds of books is worthy. Today, there are lots of different books that reading them is a kind of waste of time. So if you don't decide a good book, there is no difference in what way you choose for wasting your time.
Secondly, One of the main importance between the reading and watching television is that in the reading a book, you have the ability of choosing what you want, but when you turn o the television, you have to watch all the things which are prepared for you before, and you are just a consumer.
Finally, Governments have a significance effect on the medias and particularly television programs. I prefer to be far away from every thing which is related to the policy of governments , therefore the best thing is reading the book lonely!
In the conclusion, reading a books provides a healthier condition for your mind and keeps you far from the noisy world of advertising, you improve your abstraction and you will be aware of the big mans points of view (the author of the book) in different subjects.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, kind of, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.0286738351 54% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 43.0788530466 65% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 52.1666666667 58% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 241.0 407.700716846 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.622406639 4.8611393121 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 4.48103885553 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63659679272 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 212.727598566 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.564315352697 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 618.680645161 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.6003584229 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.1344086022 119% => OK
Sentence length SD: 113.421558797 48.9658058833 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.4 100.406767564 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1 20.6045352989 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 5.45110844103 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.5376344086 144% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219647280926 0.236089414692 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0832324566902 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069321112343 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126412604738 0.150856017488 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0532037058394 0.0645574589148 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 86.8835125448 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.0537634409 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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