It has recently been announced that a large shopping center may be built in your neighborhood. Do you support or oppose this plan? Why? Use specific reasons and details to support your answer.
There have been some moot points about a shopping center which construct near our neighborhood. The question of whether this issue has a positive or negative aspect of our life has aroused as a subject of controversy among people. When it comes to my position, by weighing up the pros and the cons, I strongly subscribe to the point that it has a positive aspect of our life. I have some reasons, the most outstanding of which will be expounded in the ensuing paragraphs.
To begin with, without doubt it is truth to say that the establishment of a large shopping center will absolutely breed traffic and noise problems in spite of the fact that a large amount of people from different area of city will come to my neighborhood for shopping. However, these problems could be solved by making plans. For example, this building should be built close to public transportation systems.
On the other hand, it would be very convenient to have a new shopping center in the neighborhood that can provide people with different sores, some restaurants and also movie theaters and create a more lively enviroment. Furthermore, shopping would take shorter time than used to do, mainly because the new mall probably have every thing which people have the special privilege to buy their needs in the same place.
By the same token, another paramount reason must be mentioned here is that building a new shopping center can make more job opportunities for the people who live in this area due to building projects needs various skills and experts, therefore, many local people can contribute to these projects and find a job.
To wrap it up, according to the aforementioned reasons, I strongly believe that positive effects of constructing the new shopping center certainly offset its disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 98, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: Whether; The question whether
... which construct near our neighborhood. The question of whether this issue has a positive or negative a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in spite of, to begin with, by the same token, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 7.30242825607 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 12.0772626932 91% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 5.01324503311 100% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 301.0 270.72406181 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98006644518 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78825632812 2.5805825403 108% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 145.348785872 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574750830565 0.540411800872 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 419.366225166 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 3.25607064018 184% => OK
Article: 2.0 8.23620309051 24% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 2.5761589404 272% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 13.0662251656 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.2457706992 49.2860985944 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.272727273 110.228320801 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 21.698381199 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7272727273 7.06452816374 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153879558544 0.272083759551 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0582284794198 0.0996497079465 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0332069513158 0.0662205650399 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080087508611 0.162205337803 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0250116400003 0.0443174109184 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.3589403974 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.2367328918 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.42419426049 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 63.6247240618 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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