In some countries more and more adults choose to continue to live with their parents after they graduate and have found jobs. Do the advantages of this trend outweigh its disadvantages?
In many societies, people tend to move out of their parents' house when they are older than eighteen years old, while some prefer remaining to stay still due to several reasons.
On the one hand, having your own place to live gives people many perks. First of all, when people grow up, they would require more privacy. For example, living alone offers people a private place to work and avoid unneccessary disturbances. Not only does it helps them to concentrate better, but also enable them to relax completely with an abundance of alone time. Additionally, people would become more self-reliant if they need to juggle everything themselves. From daily activities like washing dishes and doing laundry to financial management, this plays a pivotal foundation to equip young adults with intrinsic skills to succeed in life.
On the other hand, there are several advantages if more and more adults remain to stay under the same roof with their parents. Firstly, they would be able to save a significant amount compared to those who need to pay for their rentals every month. this savings could be used to invest in potential businesses like entrepreneurship or stock exchanges to generate more income. Secondly, the advantage of proximity to their parents would not be superseded by any means. Being able to look after the aging parents probably one of people's top priorities. Besides, living together with parents would help to enhance the family bond through family daily interactions.
In conclusion, despite some of its drawbacks, having the accommodation with parents even after people have grown up offers more benefits in terms of cost effectiveness and family relationship.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'help'?
Suggestion: help
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Line 3, column 259, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'help'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: help
...ccessary disturbances. Not only does it helps them to concentrate better, but also en...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...d to pay for their rentals every month. this savings could be used to invest in pote...
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Line 5, column 250, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d to pay for their rentals every month. this savings could be used to invest in pote...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20146520147 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71977466977 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644688644689 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.2775177793 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.428571429 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0714285714 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300669830031 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0951334081204 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601245756599 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173058217716 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580682689253 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.