Children finds difficult to concentrate or pay attention in the school. What are the reasons?
How it can be solved?
Children theses finds very difficult to pay attention to their studies. Different factors effects their concentration level. Few areas are there which contribute the reduction.
Certainly, education system is a main contributing factor to the reduction in students attributes. Teachers are not giving much emphasis on the child as they are more concern about getting higher grades. Schools must such that child enjoy their studies which helps them in increasing their interests. Internet is also Plays a pivotal roles, pupil are always seen on social media such Facebook, Instagram, what's up. When they wake up in the morning, first thing is phone, they play games al the time.
Parents and professor has to take corrective measures example reducing cellphone timing by not providing them with internet facilities. If it has to be provided as its sometime important for their studies, a proper schedule has to be maintain. Classes should also be such so pupil can enjoy their studies. Atmosphere in the schools and colleges must have such entertaining which can bring the students mind in their studies. They can essentially install mini theaters, the main purpose is to bring students to school by making them watch movies, peliculas regarding their studies.
One can conclude that , students are not giving their best to schools as their mind are diverted to various other things if we can bring them back to the straight line they can be attentive to their courses and can achieve so much in their lifes. School authorities and parents needs to pay attention to their system of working and educating students and need to adopt some interesting ideas.
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| 2019-04-15 | Arun rathour | 67 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, regarding, so, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1394.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16296296296 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5877184575 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.588888888889 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.7904685988 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.9333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.8 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202181576608 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.068722839326 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0781167579133 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136764732881 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703833604443 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.