In some areas of the US, a curfew is imposed in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about it?
Increasing crime rates are a cause of worry in a majority of the countries. While our society is predominated by the good souls, there are some bad apples, who are the main source for the rise in such criminal activities. Due to this fear, many youngsters in the US are not permitted to leave their house after a certain time at night or they have to be accompanied by a parent.
It is a shame, unsocial activities which are conducted by a handful of evil people leads to a disruption in the entire society. People do not get the basic right of freedom to roam around in their own locality.
Adolescence is an age where youngsters wants to try out new things, they are getting ready to be part of the work culture and would want to explore various options. But, if an individual would be refrained to be on his own, he might end up being frustrated or agitated, that could lead to tensions and arguments in the family.
Additionally, the youngsters to prove their point may start disobeying their elders and follow their own wish. This retaliation could further damage their personality and also affect their future.
In my opinion, authorities should try and be vigilant especially after late evenings and monitor criminal activities. Lack of education and unemployment are the two most important factors for the growing crime rates in the society, accordingly the government should take some strict measures for these harmful evils and eradicate it as soon as possible for the betterment of the society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 35, Rule ID: TRY_AND[1]
Message: "Try and" is common in colloquial speech, but "'try to'" is recommended for writing.
Suggestion: try to
...ure. In my opinion, authorities should try and be vigilant especially after late eveni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, if, may, so, while, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81538461538 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7365485972 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630769230769 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1647105311 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.818181818 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6363636364 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.18181818182 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152678793777 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508173300949 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644070637031 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0717429609572 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598660871626 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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