A friend who is living overseas should visit you soon and would love to stay at your place.
Write a letter and explain.
Why he/she cannot stay at your place this time.
Suggest an alternative arrangement
Invite him/her to stay in the future.
Dear Ali,
I am sorry I didn’t get chance to reply to your previous mail in which you mentioned that you are coming to Lahore and would love to stay with me. I am writing to inform you that it won’t be possible for me to adjust you this time as my parents are in town and they are staying at my house until end of the next month.
Since this is your first visit to Lahore and not familiar with the areas at all. Good news is that I have already found an other place for you to stay, which literally is few blocks away from my house. Therefore, we won’t have any issues in catching up and visiting sites together.
The room, which I have booked for you, is really modern with attached washroom, air conditioned and free Wi-Fi included. The house itself has a massive pool and gym, where you could work out during the day and laundry is just around the corner as well. Bus stop is right across your house in case you want to use public transport
If you would ever get a chance again to visit Lahore, I would want you to stay with me and you will be glad to hear that I am buying a larger house in two months time. I am very excited and looking forward to seeing you.
Truly yours,
Hasan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Ali, I am sorry I didn't get chance to r...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: AN_OTHER[1]
Message: Did you mean 'another'? This word sequence is usually spelled together.
Suggestion: another
... Good news is that I have already found an other place for you to stay, which literally ...
^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rd to seeing you. Truly yours, Hasan
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, really, so, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 233.0 206.0 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.24463519313 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06636204183 2.54303337028 81% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 127.690721649 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613733905579 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 16.3608247423 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.9622108888 44.8134815571 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9 76.5299724578 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3 16.8248392259 138% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4 4.34317383033 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.233211212234 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0840903193126 0.0766984524023 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672527577933 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146979445359 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.05801137111 0.0580467560999 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 70.7449484536 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.61 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.01 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 8.54432989691 131% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.