"Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increasingly more time to covering national news and less time to covering weather and local news. During the same time period, most of the complaints we received from viewers were concerned with the station's coverage of weather and local news. In addition, several local businesses that used to run advertisements during our late-night news program have just cancelled their advertising contracts with us. Therefore, in order to attract more viewers to our news programs and to avoid losing any further advertising revenues, we should expand the coverage of weather and local news on all our news programs."
In the given arguement, the author of arguement is business manager of television station states that over last year the broadcasting time devoted to national news has been increased and the broadcasting time for local news has been decreased due to which there are lot of complaints regisytered from viewers. The arguement made by author is full of holes and bullets in the arguement. The author arguement contains many flaws which can be improves. The valid examples will be provided to improve this flaws.
At first, the author has made assumption that most of the complaints received form viewers is concerned with coverage of weather and local news. The flaw in the assumption made by author is that he did not mention the type of complaint registered by people regarding local news and weather. It may be possible that complaint is regharding the type of content telecast on television by tv station is not appropriate. To improve this flaw, the author should provide proper information regarding complaints by the viewers.
Additionally, he assumed that local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night show have just canceled contract with television station.Now, flaw in this assumption is that he did not described about the another reasons due to cancellation of contracts by local companies. This flaw can be improved if more research is done on the other reasons of cancellation of business contracts.
On the other hand, it can be stated that the reduction in broadcasting time for local news and weather news is one of the important reason due to which the broadcasting time of local news, weather news and national news can be rescheduled and proper offers should be provided to local businesses for advertising contracts.
At the end, there are many flaws in arguement given by author. The flaws were highlighted and many suggestions were provided to improve it. In this way the author can work on the suggestion to increase the number of viewers and to regain the advertisment contracts by local businesses.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: It may be possible that complaint is regharding the type of content telecast on television by tv station is not appropriate.
Error: may Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: telecast Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: tv Suggestion: me
Error: regharding Suggestion: regarding
Sentence: Additionally, he assumed that local businesses that used to advertise during our late-night show have just canceled contract with television station.Now, flaw in this assumption is that he did not described about the another reasons due to cancellation of contracts by local companies.
Error: late-night Suggestion: late night
Sentence: On the other hand, it can be stated that the reduction in broadcasting time for local news and weather news is one of the important reason due to which the broadcasting time of local news, weather news and national news can be rescheduled and proper offers should be provided to local businesses for advertising contracts.
Error: news Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: rescheduled Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: At the end, there are many flaws in arguement given by author.
Error: arguement Suggestion: argument
Sentence: In this way the author can work on the suggestion to increase the number of viewers and to regain the advertisment contracts by local businesses.
Error: advertisment Suggestion: advertisement
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 2.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 337 350
No. of Characters: 1676 1500
No. of Different Words: 141 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.285 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.973 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.795 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 116 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 96 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 72 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 53 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 24.071 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 14.484 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.429 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.367 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.615 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.121 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...en arguement, the author of arguement is business manager of television station s...
^^
Line 1, column 452, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...tains many flaws which can be improves. The valid examples will be provided to impr...
^^^
Line 5, column 150, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Now
...nceled contract with television station.Now, flaw in this assumption is that he did...
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Line 5, column 198, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'describe'
Suggestion: describe
...w in this assumption is that he did not described about the another reasons due to cancel...
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Line 5, column 361, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...research is done on the other reasons of cancellation of business contracts. O...
^^
Line 7, column 312, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ided to local businesses for advertising contracts. At the end, there are many...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.6327345309 112% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.9520958084 69% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 13.6137724551 81% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 28.8173652695 69% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 55.5748502994 97% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 16.3942115768 116% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1715.0 2260.96107784 76% => OK
No of words: 336.0 441.139720559 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10416666667 5.12650576532 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.56307096286 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87224277478 2.78398813304 103% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 204.123752495 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4375 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 520.2 705.55239521 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.8473053892 105% => OK
Sentence length SD: 89.7263413192 57.8364921388 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.5 119.503703932 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 23.324526521 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.70786347227 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.25449101796 114% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.20758483034 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 6.88822355289 44% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271272693067 0.218282227539 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834395295571 0.0743258471296 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100520159091 0.0701772020484 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151632175005 0.128457276422 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0832763704505 0.0628817314937 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.3799401198 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 48.3550499002 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 12.197005988 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.5979740519 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.93 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 98.500998004 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 12.3882235529 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 11.1389221557 104% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.9071856287 101% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 54.17 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.25 Out of 6
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