Some people say it is important to keep your home and your work place tidy, with everything organized and in the correct place.
What is your opinion about this?
How can the look of your house and work place affects people impressions? Many people think it is essential to always keep your house and your office clean and well organized. And others can see the importance of such behaviour. However, this essay will discuss why I completely agree that it is very important to always keep the place around you organized and tidied up.
On the first hand, some people are not very interested in keeping everything organized and clean. They may think of it as a waste of time to spend your day in cleaning and tidying up everything. And it would be more useful if you enjoyed your time or spend it in working and finishing your tasks. For instance, many Families dose not care about organizing their houses specially families with more than one child. With the mother busy all day around with her children and the house work, they became more concerns about enjoying every moment as a family and do not overwhelm themselves with cleaning and organizing everyday. Furthermore, for some employees, it is more important for them to finish up their work duties without distracting themselves with keeping their offices clean or organized.
Conversely, others believe it is vital to them to always make sure their houses or workplaces are organized and neat. As it gives them motivation to stay or work in such organized atmosphere. No doubt that a well-organized house reflects a peaceful and relaxing impressions for its habitants and their guests. In addition to working in a clean and organized place will enhance your productivity and reduces stress levels during work. With everything in its proper place making it easier to find and also help you achieve your duties faster.
To conclude, this essay illustrated why some people do not believe in maintaining their houses and offices clean and organized all the time. Others can not live in a miss, and believe it is vital to live and work in well organized places for the reflects it has for your behaviour and attitude.
In my opinion, I believe it is essential to always keep your place tidy and neat. To make your life easier and to feel less stress either while staying at home or while working.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: NOUN_AROUND_IT[1]
Message: Consider using 'the surrounding place'?
Suggestion: the surrounding place
...hat it is very important to always keep the place around you organized and tidied up. On the fir...
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Line 3, column 616, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...themselves with cleaning and organizing everyday. Furthermore, for some employees, it is...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, first, furthermore, however, if, look, may, so, well, while, as for, for instance, in addition, no doubt, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 10.4138276553 288% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1824.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 377.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83819628647 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.4064143971 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55882807608 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46949602122 0.561755894193 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.432915622 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.0 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8421052632 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21052631579 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422467552736 0.244688304435 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141768898983 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793337790919 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.256896477585 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469160463295 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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