Roles of government, companies and individuals to combat climate change
In last few decades climate has been changing step by step. Continuous increase of companies, factories, and transportation pollution is also increased by this climate changes take place. By this transportation,pollution may cause some disease and we can’t even breathe properly. And humans are burning tree and clearing the forest for their needs it may lead to greenhouse effect. We can see in some areas there were rain fall in other place it may not rain its because of climate changes in world. Due to this changes we see winter in summer and summer in winter.
Everyone should participate by individual or co-operate with government taking process. Firstly we should plant tree rather then cutting tree and forest. Other then climate change take place by companies it may release huge amount of smoke it will pollute the environment badly. Instead in companies they can use smoke purifiers inside the chimney by this it cause less amount of smoke pollution in environment. The government should also take some strite law to control it. Also they use to give some awareness to people about the environment in medias, radio, tv ext.,. They can even give some advertisements in newspapers or making progress in urban and rural areas.
In the end I will say climate changes is a serious issues and it has harmfull effects In our body. we should control it. And governments should take serious impact on this climate change.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'decades'' or 'decade's'?
Suggestion: decades'; decade's
In last few decades climate has been changing step by step....
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Line 1, column 211, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , pollution
...anges take place. By this transportation,pollution may cause some disease and we can'...
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Line 1, column 465, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...ain fall in other place it may not rain its because of climate changes in world. Du...
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Line 1, column 513, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...use of climate changes in world. Due to this changes we see winter in summer and sum...
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Line 2, column 124, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...ss. Firstly we should plant tree rather then cutting tree and forest. Other then cli...
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Line 2, column 154, Rule ID: OTHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'other than'?
Suggestion: Other than
...ee rather then cutting tree and forest. Other then climate change take place by companies ...
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Line 2, column 160, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
...her then cutting tree and forest. Other then climate change take place by companies ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Instead,
... it will pollute the environment badly. Instead in companies they can use smoke purifie...
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Line 2, column 359, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...purifiers inside the chimney by this it cause less amount of smoke pollution in envir...
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Line 2, column 475, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...lso take some strite law to control it. Also they use to give some awareness to peop...
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Line 2, column 485, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...ome strite law to control it. Also they use to give some awareness to people about ...
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Line 2, column 569, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...he environment in medias, radio, tv ext.,. They can even give some advertisements ...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: We
...nd it has harmfull effects In our body. we should control it. And governments shou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 10.5418719212 47% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 6.10837438424 246% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 8.36945812808 131% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 5.94088669951 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 20.9802955665 119% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 5.75862068966 174% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1196.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 239.0 242.827586207 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00418410042 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85412085365 2.71678728327 105% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 139.433497537 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564853556485 0.580463131201 97% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 379.143842365 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6551724138 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.5024630542 68% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1755864337 50.4703680194 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.75 104.977214359 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9375 20.9669160288 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.4375 7.25397266985 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.12807881773 73% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.33497536946 244% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 6.9802955665 29% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 2.91625615764 343% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.165102251001 0.242375264174 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553545376544 0.0925447433944 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0570812635607 0.071462118173 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117326642048 0.151781067708 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0152597708863 0.0609392437508 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 12.6369458128 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.1260098522 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 10.9458128079 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 11.5310837438 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.32886699507 96% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 55.0591133005 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.94827586207 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.3980295567 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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