You work at home and have problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment.
In your letter
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to complain about the defective printer which I have purchased from your shop recently.
Let me explain in detail. My name is Rakesh Soni, resident of Mumbai. Two weeks ago, I have bought HP laser printer with series no M321 with 1 year warranty on 14th Apr’2019. Unfortunately, it has malfunctioned two days ago. First of all, the quality of printing is extremely poor. Moreover, the paper gets jammed so often. In addition, the printer reboots automatically frequently. The specs of this printer is quite high so I believe it might be having some manufacturing defect. It’s quite annoying and frustrating that I am unable to submit my work to my client due to this defective printer. The delay in submission of this assignment may cost me to lose future orders.
I would like to request you to replace me this printer with new one as soon as possible, or else I would like for a full refund. If neither of them is possible then I would take this matter to consumer board.
Yours faithfully,
Rakesh Soni
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...or else I would like for a full refund. If neither of them is possible then I woul...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, moreover, so, then, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78260869565 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79987847427 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 127.690721649 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695652173913 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.5085023537 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8571428571 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35714285714 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142648040507 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403860275981 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422311558856 0.0603063233224 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0960571445744 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259604632707 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 41.2886597938 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.