Map : the changes of various facilities in the city between 2007 and 2010.
The map elucidates several alterations around the city hospital amenities from 2007 to 2010. At first glance, it is evident that the most noticeable changes occurred for the shape of the road around the city hospital.
To begin with the facilities around hospital, in the southwest of the city hospital, there was a new bus station which replaced the place of the bus stop in 2007. Furthermore, 2007 to 2010 witnessed the establishment of the vehicle park of the staff, which was established to alter the position of car park of the staff and public, and the bus stop in previous time, moreover, the car park for public had been constructed in the east part of the city hospital.
In accordance with the alterations of the road in the city, there are two roundabouts in which it connected to each other via hospital road. The first roundabout was built in the southeast of the new bus station in which the second roundabout had been developed in the northwest of the new car park for the staff. In contrast, the city hospital remained unchanged over the entire period.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, in contrast, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 888.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7486631016 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64961255306 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491978609626 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 264.6 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.9198206772 43.030603864 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 22.9334400587 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185540737306 0.215688989381 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953616651425 0.103423049105 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0866482075148 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139816947349 0.15604864568 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0952488048422 0.0819641961636 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 61.2550243902 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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