There is huge increase in the size of cities. Many cities have grown in a haphazard way why is careful planning important in the development of cities?
The development of any country depends upon their growing number of cities. In past few years, people moving out towards the urban areas from the rural locality. The increasing number of people want to live in a central areas of city because it is quite near from all of the facilities to access them quickly. This facilities includes such as railways, local transport, departmental stores and other daily intermediaries which is easier to buy and sell easily from the central areas of city.
The necessity of developing a city is depend upon the planning of city structure which is also based on the how government want to prepare it. The organised form of development needed when city growing day by day. The planning of city map divided on the different basis and collaborate together and make a budget over it, so goverment have a accuracy about how much money they have to pay for constructing and developing a city.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 221, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'area'?
Suggestion: area
...ber of people want to live in a central areas of city because it is quite near from a...
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Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...s of city because it is quite near from all of the facilities to access them quickly. This...
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Line 1, column 311, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: These
... the facilities to access them quickly. This facilities includes such as railways, l...
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Line 1, column 327, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[1]
Message: You should probably use 'include'.
Suggestion: include
...to access them quickly. This facilities includes such as railways, local transport, depa...
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Line 3, column 39, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'depended'.
Suggestion: depended
... The necessity of developing a city is depend upon the planning of city structure whi...
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Line 3, column 105, Rule ID: THE_HOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'how'?
Suggestion: how
...f city structure which is also based on the how government want to prepare it. The orga...
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Line 3, column 215, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...nt needed when city growing day by day. The planning of city map divided on the dif...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ake a budget over it, so goverment have a accuracy about how much money they have...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 772.0 1615.20841683 48% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 159.0 315.596192385 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85534591195 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68954526492 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 176.041082164 57% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62893081761 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 506.74238477 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.7379582756 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.285714286 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217524158207 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0949140802138 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699009523797 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162549870963 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0869229338136 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 78.4519038076 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.